The Japanese in this (last line) is incorrect. It should read:
ここで受け取ります
I think having international ones is good, but perhaps they could be made separate so that merchants can choose the one for the country in which they are selling. Paypal does the same kind of customization for what credit cards are accepted on their logo images.
Are you Japanese?
You are not wrong, but it seems like your suggestion is a full sentence and it means like "receive" more than accept. I think the one in the Logo is already good enough for Japanese...