Thank you. I would also like to have their opinion, especially Adam Back since I borrowed a lot from his homomorphic value scheme (https://bitcointalk.org/index.php?topic=305791.msg3294618#msg3294618). But every opinion is welcomed, I just want the paper to be reviewed.
Bybitcoin, if you have any doubt you can PM me and will respond ASAP. I know the paper ended up being too "dense". Maybe I should write a "lighter" version?