Interesting. Who owns this site?

Found one mistake:

"At the time of this writing in May 2015 Monero is at the very begging of its story."

Also I would cut up the story into more paragraphs, it's a bit of a long read (as in all in one) and not very attractive to the eye.

edit:
and another one, 'The central argument regarding Monere value add as an investment is that the value proposal presented above is plausible, '