I think everything looks great now, but the voice and a small white noise in the background is a bit disturbing. The voice is like coming from inside of a cave. I think sound recording device has to be a bit better that cancels noise etc.. Then it should be perfect

Thank you Jared!
PS: I also felt a bit like you are rushing this time and the last part you turned your eyes to the left

But definitely something is improved in every new episode. Keep going Jared !