I'll try some different fonts and ideas based on your feedback. If they don't work out, no hard feelings. I'm just trying to contribute.
Constructive criticism is interest, and a
good thing (especially coming from smooth). Go with it, and don't let your ego cloud the way. You're really onto something good here, even if it takes some more work. What you're doing is very important, and I say that with no sarcasm or satire.