Those lyrics are terrible. As is the rap.
Could you have picked a worse song to model it after?
MAN U CORNY.
Might as well have made a bitcoin song out of
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZSBq8geuJk0
Haters' gonna hate
I think the song is great, and having bitcoin related art besides the technological projects is a rather welcomed idea that we all should support, no matter how we feel regarding a particular piece of art.