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Re: [ANN][NOTE]DNotes - Company Launch and Book for Small Business Owners in 2016...
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DNotes
on 04/03/2016, 00:35:08 UTC
Going to have a designer work on the cover for the book. For your reference, here is the mock design. We have changed a few things since, like the title Improve Your Odds: The Four Pillars of Business Success. If anyone has any ideas, or is interested in participating in the design, now would be a good time. We are getting closer by the day, so we want to get everything ready.

I like it all with one exception:

“Imagine that you are creating a complete and functioning system with a multitude of
subsystems and component parts. Now imagine that this system you’re creating is somehow
disordered to the point where some of those components are not working properly, causing
those subsystems to fail to work in harmony with one another"

Needs to be shortened, perhaps limited to 20 words or less. IMO
 

Makes sense, we can probably shorten that but deliver the same message while making it stand out more.