Included for now, but PayPal is one word and not Pay pals. Redo, so I can change the pic in Post #2.
This was actually intentional - a word play on PayPal suggesting you can pay friends (pay a pal) and businesses rather than using the brand PayPal (or any other similar payment provider). If it wins (which is unlikely) I'm happy to turn it into PayPal if that is more to the point and less confusing.
I like this, but there's that word 'is' again. I'm going to do a mock-up based on this and submit in your name.
Thanks, this is a mock version of the mastercard slogan which uses "there is" - that's why, but your E-Prime version works fine. Thanks making and including it.
The play on words IS a nice aspect of your design. Sorry that I overlooked it.
You like this one better? so i can make the picture in case you find it better:
Bitcoin, the evolution way to freedom.
A global and carefree transaction system.
WITHOUT BANKS.
or maybe adding the (r) too.
Bitcoin, the (r)evolution way to freedom.
A global and carefree transaction system.
WITHOUT BANKS.
shorter and nice too:
Bitcoin, the evolution towards freedom.
Global carefree transaction currency,
WITHOUT BANKS.Regardless of which one is used, you'll hold title to all the variants on the same theme, including mine and others' input on this submission. That said, personally I'm leaning toward the following:
Bitcoin, the (r)evolution/ary
path to freedom,
delivering a global
secure payment system.
WITHOUT BANKS