That sound good, but... Is the same that company shares. The owners of the share get money from the incomes of companys, but having tokens, how do you get money?. You have to explain better the bussiness model.
The coins only grant them the rights to receive future dividend. Coin owners do not own the company at all but they can participate in daily management business in order to increase the value of the coins so they can sell it in the exchange market. We are planning to sell our coins for BTC.