I DO NOT LIKE IT!!
You post that "Bitcoin is completely anonymous" and "Bitcoin has no fee". Both statements are not true so i stopped reading there.
If you want get people interested in Bitcoin, then first of all do not lie to them! Or else they will think Bitcoin is a scam and are done with it.
This is not helping.
It is far more
not engaging to say pseudo anonymous instead of anonymous when the difference is so little for the general user.
Bitcoin's fees compared to PayPal or Stripe are so much lower, that the final conclusion for the general user is - not existent.
The whole concept is to talk about the final values the user gets. Not explaining every small and technical detail.