Too generic. ASICminer is paying dividends and doing what they said they would do. Avalon has delivered to the tune of 1/2 of the total network hashrate. Helveticacoin isn't asking for prepay and will be very interesting when they hit the market.
BFL is the only company advertising what they can't demonstrate.
Then change the text to say BFL outright. They still own the rights to their name and could kill the ad or threaten legal action. I almost went with "3 LETTER ACRONYM ASIC COMPANY..."
Just please don't use that other horrific colored background gradient.