Looking at your preliminary roadmap, it looks as though you are opening the ICO before releasing the whitepaper. Is this correct? If so, that is a horrible idea, as you're asking people to give you money with no proof of any working code or that you have the technical chops to pull off this sort of project.

And since you're doing an ICO, the ANN didn't mention why you need the money--without a whitepaper detailing the sort of code this project will use, potential buyers have no reason to assume that you need money for anything useful.

I would suggest you answer these types of questions before taking the ICO live, otherwise this looks like a lame money-grab.