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Escrowing looks OK, SFR10's confirmation is enough for me.
Thought that something extra simple may be a good idea. Sometimes less is more...
Easy to make so I'm not loosing much in case of rejection.
So far you didn't comment any of peoples work, can we have few words from you, OP?
Clues, little directions of what you like or dislike.  

Edit: just realised that i have made nasty typo corrected.