That's perfect, the explanation is just perfect for everyone even for those that don't know much about bitcoin.
One thing that could irritate people is the waiting time, for this tutorial it took you 5 minutes but in reality it takes more to sell bitcoin but shorter to buy bitcoin.
What kind of verification are needed for the second and third option? Why it didn't require phone number when you wanted to buy bitcoin worth 20 CAD?
P.S let us know where and how much have you purchased the sunglasses

, I'm gonna buy something similar hehe.