-Doesn't mention anything about escrow.
-No info about the team, you're not going to launch an ICO without actually providing real names and identities
-Ethereum Operating system, strange name to call. There's something called EthOS for mining
-Why are you using a free email client with Protomail instead of an email with your domain?
-No Github, by the looks of it this is just ideas and no development.
Project seems way to ambitious and a shitload of ideas and concepts with 0 development.
No offense but I am guessing this is currently a one man project looking to raise funds to hire a team to code the entire thing if it's real or a quick cash grab.
Just that until proven otherwise.
You are right about the ethereum operating system, I was first thought it is EthOS as you mentioned. I think dev might have to change the name abit, because EthOS is somewhat popular, might confused people.