Thank you for your feedback!
These questions are easier for me to answer, because I know them better than the questions of the ICO organization (I hope it is also correct in the near future). :-)
It's true that the market for comics on paper and digital comics is not yet comparable. Although the latter's share, in such countries as Japan is already great, and most importantly continues to increase.
That is why, our main product around which we build our entire business, is not just another comic book reader. This is a completely different product, which is aimed not so much at comic book lovers as the market for learning foreign languages.
As for comics on paper, we also will be able to enter this market, with the organization of marketplace on blockchain.
If to look at your project in this context (languages learning) it's slightly better, but in your ANN, for example, it is mentioned only once, in one sentence. Doesn't look like the main aim. I would suggest to make more accent on it. Also it is hard to understand how will you implement this blockchain backed database of rights on the comics.