1. It is a UK Gov legal requirement to have your registration number on your website, is there a reason you are lacking this fundamental requirement?
2. I don't understand your calculations. You say the company will distribute 50% of the rental income which you would expect to be a gross yield to be 8-12%, then you say the net profit will be 25-30% less than the gross yield... or 9% (12% x .75)... if you made the max. 12% and distributed 50%. that would be 6%?
3. What is a "bounty at the end of the 30 years"? Was that a typing error?
4. Who are your competitors? How will this change anything?
5. Is there any reason you are rushing it and not taking the time to show a more professional presentation?
I don't mean to be harsh but it seems this project is being done on a whim... you seem to change your direction with every opinion.
It's "almost" a good idea but it seems a little scammy the way it is all thrown together.
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https://www.gov.uk/running-a-limited-company/signs-stationery-and-promotional-material[/i]
On business letters, order forms and websites, you must show:
the companys registered number
its registered office address
where the company is registered (England and Wales, Scotland or Northern Ireland)
the fact that its a limited company (usually by spelling out the companys full name including Limited or Ltd)
If you want to include directors names, you must list all of them.
If you want to show your companys share capital (how much the shares were worth when you issued them), you must say how much is paid up (owned by shareholders).