To me, it's not that important that the white paper was not as well written as it could be.  Your business fundamentals seem strong. I like that you're invested in the company and in building a business. 

I worry a lot about ICOs of other companies that are just too slick - sure sign of scam. 

Can you tell me if the funds raised counter on your website is updated?  It sounded from the post earlier that you guys are getting local investors, and I don't know if those funds are reflected on your online counter.