The project, like i said is interesting, but your whitepaper has been written with a technical language that few people can understand easily. But this is a contradiction: you are planning to release an application which is developed to be user-friendly, but your project's description doesn't seems the same...
maybe a bit too technical for people without background, but it could be requested by their investors and advisors. is the right choice for this thread.
I said it just because reach the most of people which still do not use cryptos is THEIR first purpose in the presentation.