I have created my first video for DeepOnion, in fact my first ever video. I mainly create advertising content for social media but wanted to get my feet wet in a bit of video material. So everything is original beside the DeepOnion logo, created in adobe Illustrator and composed in after effects. So I only want feedback, criticism good or bad as this will only give me direction. Its best viewed in fullhd. Thanks
https://youtu.be/X5OioDMQsAoLooks good for your first one.

Want to hear some suggestions?
- Add some music (but dont use music with copyright) or a background music
- add a short intro
- explain a little what DeepOnion is about and how to use it
- add tags to your video so people can find it better