OK - you asked.

1) I think your narrative is weakened by your jumping from metaphor to metaphor. War, Cars, Marriage... it's a little sloppy. Though this is a writing craft issue, and I am not a writer by craft, so I have no suggestions on fixing it.

2) Though fixing 1) might also resolve 2), wherein you claim that: to satoshi, bitcoin was an instrument of war. That's an awfully strong statement. One that frankly I've never seen evidence of. And you provide no evidence thereof other than your bald claim. You should either support the statement, or drop it. The confusion over this gets in the way of your narrative.

3) This should be easy to fix. The name 'Bitcoin Legacy' is Just Plain Wrong. Sure, there was a Bitcoin Legacy at one time. But it was executed on the day that Segwit activated. I suggest instead 'Bitcoin Segwit' - that is a clear exposition of its true nature.

Thanks for sharing.