I think you may want to consider a native English speaking copywriter... The grammar, punctuation, spelling and general lack of proofreading in this announcement is absolutely atrocious, and will almost certainly scare away potential investors, partners and possibly even speculators...

Please let me know if you are interested in having an English major review and amend any announcements, I'll happily correct all your copy for a small bounty!

Nonetheless, best of luck on this venture!