Bravo!!!
This is how every ICO should look.
Your Whitepaper is exemplary in its technical depth and descriptiveness.
you have a clearly defined market and purpose.
You have a very realistic expectation for your initial funding, and a dedication to complete the project regardless of outcome.
you have a niche space already carved out for your product, and will connect regular businesses with the disruptive Phenom that is the blockchain.
I love this project, and I really think it's a rare example of a well-constructed and truly useful iteration of the smart contract structure...
You'll have my money!
Bravo!!!