You have really detailed whitepaper. But it is hard to read it not even because its huge. It is quite complicated. It is also comprehensive, but complicated as well. Looks like a set of lectures in university, that are of about a month of duration. Too much info for ordinary users.
I suppose you might focus on advanced users. But these advanced users do not meet your service. You should make it a bit lightweight to be understandable for everyone who see your thread.
P.S. it is also quite hard for me to follow all your thoughts..