Maybe make it clear that it is only the Pre-Sale that is over but the ICO is open and currently running with a 30% bonus for early subscribers?
The massive post with the balloons makes it looks like everything is over and the ICO is closed... which it isn't.
Anyway, reasons to buy in:- will be launched on ARK 1-click blockchain, it will be PoS with a delegate system similar to ARK, very community minded with a community fund for new development linked to Persona, great team.