I'd have to say the prospectus looks very thorough and solid, with detailed milestones and expected expenditures.
The initial and immediate effort in marketing/PR is laudable, I think it will be key for your long-term success and immediate capture of public attention. Get that snowball going downhill asap!

Did a little digging about the software house you're using, they seem an excellent choice:
http://www.pvs.com.cy/index.php/company-profile-software-development-cyprus/