First of all you haven't provided any link to your topic. Do you think it'll be a lot of users who'll search your topic by themselves? If you ask to look at something, be good at least to tell where.

If the thread you're talking about is https://bitcointalk.org/index.php?topic=3073001.msg31664158#msg31664158, it gives too little information about the bounty campaign itself. I bet most of the users won't scroll down to the second post to find some important numbers. I'd put them in the first one. Moreover, If you look closely to any bounty campaign topic here and then compare it to another one, you'll see that they usually look very similar to each other. Most of the users got used to the way information is structured so they don't need to waste many time to find what they're looking for. It's quite handy while yours is 'special'.
Next, what can I see in your topic, as your potential bounty campaign participant? Almost nothing about bounty itself. I have to go to the website and search all the information there. No offense, but even there the information is quite hardly-readable and everything looks a bit messy. There is no link to the twitter campaign sign up form (it's missing), link in the bitcointalk campaign leads to the content sign up form and etc. 0,1% of hard cap for the bounty looks a bit low if to compare with another projects.
Whitepaper also doesn't look perfect. For example, why you don't like your junior developer that much so you widened his photo?

I'd suggest you to take a few top bounty campaign topics as an examples or templates and make your own one in a similar way using the revised information form your website.