you need a lot more visual presentation, so it attracts more attention. For me - that post lacks much important information about the project. As an example - how much in ETH do you plan to gather soft/hard cap?
Absolutely man good point. You know what im just gonna post it here so yall can see. ill use my next post doing it. keep in mind some stuff like the dates are x'ed out cuz im waiting for re-launch.