Thank you for your criticism,I'm trying to improve my skills.But this is not easy, especially when there is a near at hand googl translate...)..I always check back what I wrote,but this does not give a good result as I understood, after your comment)~ This system  makes us communicate in language  that know badly~ I have many thoughts, but because of the limitation in the language barrier, I can't express them correctly... sry dude for eyes,I'm realy trying to do it's good)...