You have used impressive story for contextual purpose which motivated the people to start such project. The presentation is quite well. Now important things which anyone would like to be available is whitepaper to see the approach towards the solutions. There is lot of time till initial coin offering to start to provide missing information.
We have updated the main thread link for whitepaper,
it is accessible here.
This is the 1st version, the 2nd one will contain more concise infos about financials, partnerships and targets. We will release this 2nd version during the next week.