After reading through your whitepaper, I found your project really promising

1. The statistics you quote are real (which I verified from references) and you did not distort the meaning of the statistics when applying
2. Your proposed solutions solve the problems you mentioned, and the solutions are feasible and promising
3. Your calculation on RPKHU is logical and reasonable, with proper model assumptions 

Your whitepaper is even better than whitepapers written by professional teams!