9. What is the rise in the price of bitcoin?
New investors and expectations of other stakeholders, raised this year's price bitcoin by about 11 times. CME Group and other exchanges are planning to offer bitcoin futures contracts that can potentially expand the benefits of bitcoin. The fact that Bitcoin software guarantees its limited supply has given some investors fears about its loss. Coinbase bitcoin traffic has been overloaded two or three times on November 29, 2017, when new users were registered. New hedge funds are opened every week, targeting cryptology. Their number has already exceeded 100. Most of them invest part of their money in bitcoin.
I like your explanations but I think you need to change this. Instead of the title, it should be "why Bitcoin price is volatile". Explanation s should also be revised as well. Do not explain why rise happen but rather, try to elaborate why price goes up and down from time to time for others to understand. You might also want to correct the spelling of "Mayner" it should be "Miner".