I probably am tired. I got up early, and I've drunk too much coffee. It's also recorded in a McDonalds restaurant using a Blue Yeti set to cardioid, and recoded through Audacity. I haven't edited the track, as I wanted to get a few comments. I can play with the settings, and that may make it easier to understand if people are having problems.
How about trying to record a new one in a nice and quiet place (maybe your room or some other place that doesn't have any background noise). I guess playing and editing with the setting of audacity wouldn't make much any differ from the original record of yours (I'm also using it for editing music and for creating my reggaes and other mixed musics)