Second topic about ICO in the Meta board. What it has to do with Meta? Should be moved to Altcoin discussion imo. But you want merit for your work, I get it.
You should improve readability, it is difficult to read as presented. Font choice is quite weird, I hope you didn't copy paste it from somewhere.
And tabulation would be nice as well.
As for content, I treat ICO as super high-risky investment, were you need to check carefully everything about the project. And need to diversify your risk by investing in 5-10 ICOs. This is how venture funds do, one good investment could make up for a loss of other 9. Now everybody starting with 0.1 ETH can feel himself in Peter Thiel's shoes.