No offense on this team, You've done great on this project the concept and other things rather problems that you might give solution but can you give us a presentable Whitepaper like others do. Why people give interest on your project if it was not presentable at all. One of the reason why people got interested in project is their presentable marketing whitepapers and illustrations. Just saying this to make you more powerful. Nice job on this team, just saying my opinion on your Whitepaper.
They already represented their whitepaper well and it consists all the thing they want to achieve on their project.
And this is not their Final whitepaper so it can be only their experimental or preliminary whitepaper so they can easily adapt and change the platform's mistake.