I think you should give brief information about your project. It will be more attractive. 
We briefly told about the project in WhitePaper.
So the first issue that I see is this:
Stage 1 (from 15.05.2018 to 15.06.2018): 1RTF = 0.25 USD;
Planned funds to collect: 2 500 000 USD
Stage 2 (from 16.06.2018 to 16.07.2018): 1RTF = 0.30 USD;
Planned funds to collect: 6 000 000 USD
Stage 3 (from 17.07.2018 to 17.09.2018): 1RTF = 0.40 USD;
Planned funds to collect: 8 000 000 USD
Basically your plan is to gather over 16 million USD by the end of stage 3, but based on your whitepaper diagram you won't even have a registered company or a wallet at that point. So, let's say you get 2 million by the end of June, you still won't have the wallet by then and you won't have a registered company or an office, while holding 2 million USD in donations. That looks like a joke to me, unless there's something that I'm missing.