your announcement could be better, as I think. but I was pleased with your road map, you have big plans and this is a sign of the team's interest in success
it is necessary When evaluating a coin, token, or ICO, it is worth looking into what their road map looks like. Roadmaps give you a sense of what the team behind the Project have in mind for the future, as well as telling you how confident they are that they will achieve their goals.
A White Paper is the perfect tool to share vision, passion, and ambition for project, with those who would like to contribute and play a pivotal role. I hope the White Paper will attract not just participants today but supporters invested in the mission of your blockchain project, for years to come.