I am very glad that most of the funds collected will go to the development of the project in the future and the marketing plan. The right approach!
Yes, the marketing plan is an essential part of the company's plan, and the marketing planning process should be implemented as part of the overall planning and budgeting process of the project.
What pleases you, white paper is written perfectly and you can easily understand the essence of the project, just do not have enough information about the founders of the company