Your logic is mostly correct "although I did not understand the third point" but you have to rephrase it to be attractive.
Commonality #1 Solution Focused
For example, you can set up a coffee shop and use Blockchain to ensure transparency.
The coffee was grown on day X, using the equipment x, and then harvested using x, packaged x, and made by x, all these steps checked using blockchain to ensure the highest quality.
Commonality #2 Trust Earned
High transparency leads to trust, as the customer will ensure a high-quality product with the accents requested, leading to confidence in the store without the use of trademarks.
For the rest of the points, I think you confuse the concept of "Blockchain" and "Cryptocurrency," correct me if I am wrong.
Thank you for the feedback! I love your examples and how easy you make it connect. I will be thinking about your logic to better my message in the future. THANKS!
As for your comment on confusing blockchain and crypto, I probably didn't explain it properly. I meant to say... "Blockchain makes cryptocurrency possible and it can be a unique reward system that stands out against thousands of loyalty program out there". Hope this is more clear!