The whole tone of it was off for me. It should have been an authoritative instruction to the judge on what to do. Instead it reads like a narrative from this thread  I was half expecting to see an OMG in there. OMG and he even rented this jet for x amount dollars. The whole thing reminded me of the childish banter between Uncle Stu's lawyer and the gawsuit lawyers at one stage.   They were arguing back and forth in writing on some lame point, it just read "petty".  And so did this.  This should have had a more serious measured tone to it.