You would need to give a lot more details than that. To some $30K isn't much, to others it's the world. But in either case, a savvy investor wouldn't waste his time with a post like this if you barely bother to show effort.
It could've gone worse, but you're definitely near that end of the spectrum. WHY should investors care about you and your company? What problems are you trying to solve? How will you make money?
Absolutely agree with you. I`m doing project above 6 month, and i have all necessary information: presentation, calculation of monetization and expanses. This topic is not for presentation of project (for this some month earlier i made different other topics on bitcointalk). I wrote my contacts for those who is interested in and looking for investment opportunities. They will contact me for detailed information.