At some points you can here a tiny tremble in your voice, you need to do more of these to practice and be more relaxed

I hear it. I can always rerecord if we decide to use my voice.
Any other suggestions for creative commons music? That was The Arrival by General Fuzz:
http://www.generalfuzz.net/tunes.php?album=0I'm going to bed now, I'll check for feedback in the morning.