Anymore feedback on this? Please give feedback on the content as well as my reading. Criticisms welcome, my ego is not wrapped up in this. I'm not trying to compete to be the voice, just putting forward an idea. This should be considered a rough draft.
I really thought your take on it was great and I think the waver in your voice was a) fine as is and b) will go away with very little experience. You should make some of these.