from top to bottom you only discuss the benefits, why don't you mention the risks too. so that people who read can know this investment better.
I agree with you, it will be even better. Not to mention that every business has risk, but sometimes people need details information on what risks that they probably can get. Of course people will prepare themselves to be ready on facing the worst situation, but having clear information about what bad things that could probably happen is one of the preparation itself.