Thanks for all the feedback everyone.
I know my writing skills aren't the best. I do have a family member lined up who is a really good story writer, she will be proofreading all my work. I guess I didn't do myself any favours not getting her to proofread the 2 pages I have released.
Wish you all the luck in creating the comics. I think you should put an ad for illustrator in "Services" section and try to find the like minded people. Instead of paying upfront you can come up with the %deal or partnership.
I like this idea and am very much open to partnering up with an illustrator in the Bitcoin space. I will post something in the services section. If anyone is interested or knows anyone who might be interested, let me know.