This kind of project needs more than a 17-page whitepaper.
Maybe further explanation of your investment fund.
But anyway, this is already a good start rather than no wp at all.
Also, since you mentioned that you are a closed-end fund type platform, getting a license from SCB is voluntary.
But are you planning to acquire your license in the near future?
This will add credibility on your project being an investment fund company.
Hey TimeTeller, thanks for checking out the whitepaper!
We wanted to keep it in roughly the same league as the Bitcoin WP - 3000 words, though we've gone a little over.
Regarding voluntary licensing, it is an option we'll seriously consider once the fund is live. The requirements are largely just annual audits and 3rd party administration which we've already committed too, though there are added financial and administrative burdens too. As we're not 100% certain we'll follow that path due to said burdens, we don't want to make any definitive public commitments prior to making a decision.
Hope that answers your question!
Warm Regards,
Oscar.