This thread in my opinion cannot compare the the ones in which you can clearly discern that the person spent some time about how to present their project. Presentation is key and in my opinion, this thread is lacking. The presentational aspect make people to not even bother reading your thread.
It is critical though you create a good one, if not have other people who can because otherwise you will lose you customer interest.
Anyways, I still hope that you get a lot of other great feedback