I see you're trying to convince us to invest with your company but I'm afraid you will get little interest from the community since most of them, in one way or another, had experienced different kinds of crypto frauds that you will find it very hard to convince them or believe in your ideas.

Moreover, your pitch will arouse suspicion since you didn't even include important information such as your company name, address, website, etc., and other important details about your company to prove that it isn't fictitious.

Now, if you really have a very good business model, then you may try to convince those traditional investors who are serious into investing because I feel you will get more likely to be disappointed pitching you ideas to the crypto-community.