I read this thread since page 1.

I think you really need to address the premine. It says it is 2% premine, but later on someone said the premine is actually a lot less, because it was started a day later. Please edit the announcement post, since not a lot of people are gonna buy a largely premined coin.

After you have done that you should consider specifying where the premine was used for or if there are still active bounties etc.