Regarding the whitepaper:
We can see some nice characteristics of the coin (and features of the client. not that important right now).
But it seems to me you want to make everybody happy. That makes me skeptic. Instead of having a "jack of all trades device" coin (eierlegende Wollmilchsau), I would prefer to have (mathematical) proofs of less features instead of the many assumptions, which appeared in this whitepaper.
If you can deliver, then everything is fine.
btw, why the need for a calculated eXocoin-network time? Didn't get that...
The wider eXocoin spreads the higher is the chance that this project is going to be a success
Remember your words when changing the IPO.